Suggestions and critique wanted

Hi all,

I have been writing and running a personal campaign setting for several years for a group of friends, and recently I have been putting the recent missions/quests online for other people to use.

So far my players are enjoying them, but I like to become better at it, write more engaging and cunning adventures for them and possibly the readers of my site. So I was hoping you guys might be willing to give me some advice on the quests I have so far. 🙂

The PDFs are downloadable here: https://imarand.nl/adventures/
Also opend up a thread on the paizo forums http://paizo.com/threads/rzs2s04x?Suggestion-and-Critique-wanted#1

Looking forward to hear what you think.

Martijn Donker

Husband, Gamer, Game Master and Story teller. Dabbler in boardgames and some small writing mainly for my campaign setting and this very site.